考研英語大作文在這個階段不必再糾結(jié)於某一篇作文了,而是站在高處,整理所背誦的范文中適合自己表達水平的句型,高屋建瓴地把握整體寫作框架,從而塑造自己的私家定制的模板。
第一段: 描圖其實是漫畫作文最重要的,也是比較有難度的。在最后的沖刺階段。不要用太多復(fù)雜的表達,用簡單的句型正確地表達即可。基本思路為: 第一句,如圖所示,第二句,人+動作+狀態(tài)+環(huán)境,最后一句可以翻譯這個圖畫中的文字,引出本文重點。
比如:以2003年的作文題目為例,我們可以這樣儲備寫作框架:
This set of drawings above vividly illustrates … As is shown in the first picture, there is/ are … (On the contrary, there is/ are …) The caption reads, “…”. (We are informed that “…”).
例:This set of drawings vividly reflects the different fates of a delicate flower under different circumstances. In the first drawing, the flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse which protects it from the threatening storm. By contrast, when it is exposed to the thunderstorm, the fragrant flower soon fades and withers, with petals scattering on the ground.
這組圖畫生動地描繪了一朵花在不同環(huán)境下的不同命運。在第一幅圖中,花被放置在溫室中,保護它免受風(fēng)暴的威脅。然而,當(dāng)他面對雷雨風(fēng)暴時,芬芳的花朵很快就枯萎凋零,花瓣散落在地上。
考慮到圖片內(nèi)容較豐富對應(yīng)的描寫字數(shù)比較多,最后一句話可省去不寫。那麼我們橫向借鑒一下,2014年考的漫畫是否也可以這樣表達呢?答案是肯定的,隻需要替換裡面的一些關(guān)鍵性的詞匯,這個寫作框架又可以煥發(fā)出它的生機和活力。
比如: This set of drawings vividly reflects the phenomenon of being thankful and filial to parents. In the first picture, a young and vigorous mother led her girl hand in hand three decades ago, while nowadays the daughter in the prime of her life guides her aged mother arm in arm in the second picture.
第二段:很多同學(xué)都會反映中間段內(nèi)容空洞,素材較少,其實隻要合理地儲備以下六類寫作素材,我們就可以以輕鬆的心態(tài)來面對2016的考研?;仡櫧陙淼淖魑目碱},基本上屬於以下的六大話題范圍。
1. 人的健康:包括心理和生理的雙方面。
2. 人的成長:包括面對的苦難,學(xué)會合作,和處理與其他人的關(guān)系﹔
3. 環(huán)保:這是人類社會存在的硬件條件,包括“污染”﹔
4. 責(zé)任:這是人類社會存在的軟件條件,包括“誠信”﹔
5. 文化的好現(xiàn)象:值得鼓勵的,比如“文化交流”,“傳統(tǒng)文化”以及“中外文化”﹔
6. 文化的壞現(xiàn)象:需要採取對策的,比如“偶像”,“網(wǎng)癮”等。
因此,要想準確自如的寫出第二段,同學(xué)們需要徹底掌握以上話題對應(yīng)的主題詞及論証
素材句,可借鑒以下范例進行總結(jié)學(xué)習(xí)。
1. 人:
1)健康
physical health 生理健康
mental fitness 心理健康
keep optimistic 保持樂觀
pessimistic 悲觀的
commit suicide 自殺
do physical exercises 進行體育鍛煉
well-balanced diet 均衡飲食
infectious diseases 傳染病
2)成長
代溝:generation gap
老年人:old/aged people, the old/aged/elders/elderly, senior citizens
獨立:independence
溺愛:doting care
獨生子女:only children
堅持:persistence
成功:success
創(chuàng)新:innovation
奮斗精神:striving spirit
拼搏精神:determined spirit
人生觀:outlook of life
信心:confidence
困難:difficulty 挑戰(zhàn):challenge
金融危機:financial crisis
就業(yè):employment
合作:cooperation/teamwork
團隊精神:team spirit
齊心協(xié)力/眾志成城: joint/cooperative efforts
2. 社會
1)環(huán)境問題
environmental protection 環(huán)境保護
keep ecological balance 保持生態(tài)平衡
sustainable development strategy可持續(xù)發(fā)展戰(zhàn)略
save the energy 節(jié)約能源(節(jié)能)
reduce the emission of greenhouse gases 減少溫室氣體排放(減排)
greenhouse effect 溫室效應(yīng)
clean renewable energy 清潔可再生能源
low carbon economy 低碳經(jīng)濟
deforestation 濫砍濫伐
desertification 沙漠化
water and soil erosion 水土流失
sandstorm 沙塵暴 snowstorm 雪災(zāi)
typhoon 臺風(fēng) flood洪水
earthquake 地震
2)義務(wù)與責(zé)任
責(zé)任:duty/responsibility
責(zé)任感:sense of responsibility
承擔(dān):shoulder/assume/undertake
逃避:avoid/shun/shirk
奉獻:devote/devotion/dedicate/dedication
職業(yè)道德:professional ethics
欺詐行為:dishonest behaviors
偽劣產(chǎn)品:fake commodities
虐待:abuse錯誤 mistreat, maltreat, ill-treat(ment)
贍養(yǎng):do good to, care, look after, take care of, financially support
3. 文化
1)好
文化交流:cultural exchange
文化融合:cultural integration/blending
多元文化:multi-culture, mosaic culture, pluralistic culture
保存珍惜:preserve and cherish
取其精華:absorb its essence
去其糟粕:resist its dark side
流行文化:popular culture
2)壞
偶像崇拜:idol worship
上網(wǎng)成癮:web addiction
數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品:digital products
電子游戲:electronic games
手機入網(wǎng):mobile-phone subscription
手機短信:text message
第三段: 第三段的寫法套路性也是比較強的,在此給大家提供一種簡單易行的寫作框架,大家可以在這個框架之上進行適當(dāng)?shù)淖晕倚薷模瑥亩蛟熳约旱乃郊以瓌?chuàng)模板。
參考框架: It is high time we placed great emphasis on …To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who… In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that …
【模板真題示例】 It is high time we placed great emphasis on the brutal phenomenon. To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who shun the responsibility. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that respecting the old has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture. (2005年真題)
最后送給各位考研戰(zhàn)士一句格言,共勉之?!癗othing is difficult to a willing heart.” 世上無難事,隻怕有心人。事在人為,雖然考研時一場艱苦的人生斗爭,相信隻要大家用心努力就一定能夠收獲勝利的果實!
來源:萬學(xué)海文