2015高考英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)及詳細(xì)解析（新課標(biāo)II卷）

今年全國(guó)新課標(biāo)I卷高考英語(yǔ)作文的題目為：

假定你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過(guò)重陽(yáng)節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival），請(qǐng)給外教露西寫封郵件，邀請(qǐng)她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：

1、出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間

2、活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等

“邀請(qǐng)信”“告知信”等應(yīng)用文題目，需要考生們掌握“建議”、“請(qǐng)求”、“感謝”等功能性語(yǔ)句。書信體作文可用到“書信三段論”，需要注意的是中間過(guò)渡段的用詞以及避免不必要的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

根據(jù)題目要求以及我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn)，列出提綱：

第一段：?jiǎn)柡?輝式自我介紹+輝式寫信背景（去敬老院）+輝式寫信目的（邀請(qǐng)同去）

第二段：主題句+輝式拓展句1（出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間）+輝式拓展句2（活動(dòng)，such as……）

第三段：我希望（你也能去）。我相信（你會(huì)喜歡這個(gè)活動(dòng)）。感謝你（讀我的信）。請(qǐng)回信（告訴我你的決定）。

【老師范文】

Dear Lucy,

How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and enrich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.

Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at 8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision.

Best wishes,

Yours,

LiHua

來(lái)源：新東方在線