2014年6月四級(jí)考試已經(jīng)結(jié)束,新東方在線四六級(jí)輔導(dǎo)團(tuán)隊(duì)第一時(shí)間為大家做了本次考試的點(diǎn)評(píng)、解析,供廣大考生參考,同時(shí)希望對(duì)12月考生的備考有所幫助。以下是作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)。
題:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown/your campus/China(多題多卷的三個(gè)不同), what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
范文:
The most interesting place
Dear Pacival,
I am thrilled to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can’t wait see you again. I miss everything that happened when I was in your city, and your parents and you were so kind to me that I will try my best this time to make your stay an enjoyable and memerable one.
My home town,Changsha, is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the star city for its well developed entertainment industry and tourism. There are numerous places and attractions worth recommending, and Yuelu Mountain is the first one that I’d like to introduce to you. Firstly, in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy. It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic of Song Dynasty. Then, after a half hour, we will reach the Bird Forest. There are various rare birds there, and they can sing, perform, and interact with us. After about an hour, we will arrive at the peak, Baiyun Summit. The scenery there is spectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the whole city.
I bet you must be very excited about all these activities, and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting for us to explore. All you need to do is pack up and go, and I assure you that this trip will be a great fun.
Should you have any question and suggestion, please let me know.
I am looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Romeo
點(diǎn)評(píng):
這篇文章在01年和04年都考過類似的題材(介紹家鄉(xiāng)),所以雖然對(duì)于滿心期待考圖畫作文的親可能有些措手不及,但是難度畢竟不大,應(yīng)該不會(huì)有太多問題。
你可以把它當(dāng)成信來寫,也可以把它當(dāng)做一片介紹性的文章來寫(把信的格式去掉即可)。
由于每個(gè)人的家鄉(xiāng)、校園和想帶去的地方不一樣,所以范文是沒有太多參考價(jià)值的。只要注意:1.明確提出了你要帶他去的地方;2.說出關(guān)于這個(gè)地方的兩三個(gè)值得去的點(diǎn)或者你曾有過的經(jīng)歷。
這里就給出你的家鄉(xiāng),校園和中國道理一樣。
以上就是本次四級(jí)考試的作文范文,祝廣大考生順利通過考試!
來源:新東方在線